Noodle run-ons (runs-on?)

Written By: admin - Mar• 18•08

Laura writes:

It starts off telling you how to figure out what to order, and not to grab a table before you order. But then you get to the last little mini-paragraph on the sign at Noodles & Co., and you see the attached.

Is it bad that I’m tempted to take a Sharpie and add a comma and a semi-colon? There are actually 2 signs in the restaurant, more or less identical. (And no, this isn’t actually hand-written. They’re mass-produced, and there’s at least one in every location.)

No, Laura, it’s not bad. It’s natural. Give in to your urges. Carry a red pen!

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5 Comments

  1. Mike G says:

    I’d say it needs a comma after “meal” and a period after “know.”

  2. Laura says:

    But a period would require a capital letter. Hence my urge to go with the semicolon.

  3. Mike G says:

    Eh. That “W” could be capital. But I could go either way.

  4. Bobby Tables says:

    I would like to know how they judge whether or not you are 100% in love with your meal. I mean, what if I’m 93% in love with it? I’m still entitled to the free meal, right?

  5. Laura says:

    No way, Mike. It’s identical to the “w” right before it. It’s gotta be a semi-colon.

    I think I should blow up the image and practice drawing commas and semicolons that just blend right into the font.

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